Tuesday, June 29, 2010

Hup, Holland, Hup!

I have spent the last couple weeks engrossed in World Cup, with a tiny bit of editing mixed in. *snort*

We root for the US (of course!), Italy (poor Azuri), and the Netherlands (the home country). So now we are left with only the Oranje. Hence the title. But of course Holland must face Brazil on Friday. So any of you newly converted soccer fans looking for someone to cheer for. Join me in ORANGE Friday. Please!

In writing news...I have spent countless hours trying to rewrite/perfect my opening chapter. Well really I'm still on the first page. But I had a breakthrough today. I thought my prior opening was perfect (except for the annoying detail of being too vague), so in rewriting it, I've been killing myself to get the flow right. Unsuccessfully, I might add. So this morning, upon returning to the grind, I reread the old opening.

SO NOT PERFECT! Ah...what an enlightening moment. I'm not perfect. hahahahaha!

Now it's time to get back to work. I have three days before soccer takes over my life again. *wink*

11 thoughts:

Hopegiver said...

Re-writing and editing, ah yes the writer's nemeis! Good luck finding just the right vibe for your words.

Karen Amanda Hooper said...

Sadly, I was cheering for England. Or I was supposed to be. They didn't give me much to cheer about.

Good luck rewriting!

Susan R. Mills said...

Been rewriting my manuscript for eight months now. I've decided it's a never ending process. Best of luck getting your opening right.

Heather Hansen said...

:) You'll get it!

DL Hammons said...

Holland it is then! :)

Crystal Cook said...

But look how much closer you're getting! You'll get it!

Lisa and Laura said...

Good luck with your opening. We're currently in the exact same boat. It's SO important to get it just right, isn't it? I know some writers can write out of order, but we need to have a strong start to move on.

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roxy said...

Love your picture, Anissa. You look great! We've enjoyed the world cup as well. I'll have to pay close attention to Holland now. Go Orange! Like you, I'm also revising. The summer schedule is busy. We can do it, right?

Amy Holder said...

I'm sure the perfect opening will come to you in a lightbulb moment. Good luck with the rest of your editing/rewriting!

Elana Johnson said...

Like I tell my CP's, don't get so hung up on the first page that you can't move forward! I hope you've got it figured out now. :)